Pt 1: The Enchanted Weapon

sina j · 03-25-2007, 03:55 AM

Part 1: The Enchanted Weapon

Prologue:

The Enchanted Weapon was first made by a member of the Mutant Rider tribe. Most of their population was killed by a devastating plague. Most races thought that the Mutant Rider tribe became instinct. Little did they know that 3 of the most elite leaders were out of their fort when this outbreak occurred. They were standing guard of the enchanted weapon. It's creator died 87 years ago, the enchanted weapon was created 100 years ago. Every 100 years, the enchanted weapon gains great power until the end of the year. Anyone that can take hold of this weapon during the year of the new century of it's creation, will obtain power like no other. They will be able to rule the world and have all worship them. You may wonder why won't one of the Mutant Rider tribe members use it. This is because the creator was smart and to prevent backstabbing in their tribe, he made it so that no Mutant Rider tribe member can lay hands on it. If they did, they would instantly die. So every 100 years, the 3 most powerful members of the tribe set off to it's location and protect if from being stolen and used. Only a few different individuals outside the Mutant Rider tribe know of it's location. One group includes the king and his loyal knights, one group includes the archers of Babylonia, and a group of amazon women.

1. The king and his 3 loyal knights were set off to find the enchanted weapon. 1 had a blue helmet, 1 had a red helmet, and 1 had a yellow helmet. They were all equal in power and were led by the king.

2. Little did they know that the spear was heavily guarded with the last 3 survivors of the Mutant Rider tribe. They had thought that their entire population was slaughtered, but they were obviously wrong, as the 3 most elite Mutant Rider leaders survived. 1 with yellow eyes, 1 with green eyes, and 1 with blue eyes.

3. Another group was also off to find the enchanted weapon. They were the 6 most elite archers from Babylonia. Their leader wore a traditional blue and red leather clothing.

4. A group of amazon women were also on their way to the enchanted weapon. A fierce assassin led them to several victories, now hoping to obtain there 4th victory.

A flashback, of their last victory.

5. The knights beat the golem brothers in a war that occurred 7 months ago. It was their bloodiest battle.

6. The archers from Babylonia took out an "undefeatable" dragon within 1 minute around 2 months ago. Their leader shot 1 arrow which pierced it's chest and instantly killed it. Every Babylonian will remember the day the dragon that terrorized them all fell through the sky and hit the ground as it lay motionless.

Unfortunately, no images remain in the minds of the group of the amazon women, as they set their mind straight on their objective, not on their victories.

7. All 4 groups were shocked as they came face to face. The Babylonian archers, the king and the knights, and the amazon women all had 1 intension. To obtain the enchanted weapon. Without any gestures or negotiations, they all immediately attacked.

8. Everybody knew that none of the groups will hold back, as the knight with the blue helmet was immediately shot and killed by an arrow from the leader of the Babylonian archers. The king froze in terror. The yellow-eyed Mutant Rider tribe member took out the knight with the yellow helmet. The amazon witch burned the knight with the red helmet. The green-eyed Mutant Rider tribe member killed the amazon spell caster before she could focus her paralysis spell. The Babylonian archers just slaughtered the blue-eyed Mutant Rider. While the archers were distracted by the battle, the amazon assassin snuck in from behind and killed 3 Babylonian archers. Luckily for them, one of them was peeing and saw the assassin, so he shot her while peeing.

9. The yellow-eyed Mutant Rider then stabbed the king. He was then shot by an arrow. The Babylonian archer leader then shot the amazon witch right in her head. The green-eyed Mutant Rider was shot down by 2 arrows. This day has been the greatest battle which will be passed down from generation to generation. It is the era of the Babylonians. They will now stand proudly above everyone else. The king and his loyal knights, the amazons, and the Mutant Riders have all been slaughtered, leaving the Babylonian archers. With great victory comes great sacrifice, as 3 Babylonian archers were killed.

10. The leader of the Babylonian archers was just 1 grasp away from becoming the most powerful man with the highest status on the entire planet. As soon as he was about to touch it, his body fell to the ground, as did the Babylonian archer standing across him. I knew greed and betrayal would come because of this enchanted weapon.... Wait! Why are his eyes glowing green? Why was his urine green!? That's not a Babylonian!! Who or what can he be!

To be continued...

Killerdude500 · 03-25-2007, 03:58 AM

Nice drawings *giggle*

Flash Demon · 03-25-2007, 03:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killerdude500

Nice drawings *giggle*

Hey, those drawing are better than anything I could do, if that says anything.

sina j · 03-25-2007, 04:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Killerdude500

Nice drawings *giggle*

Hey lol, not my fault I don't have photoshop

*sigh*

DIGID · 03-25-2007, 04:12 AM

Nice story. *laughs* Well-written and illustrated.

Good job.

The Judgeman · 03-25-2007, 04:13 AM

Lol, wth?!?
Is it suppose to be a comic strip? Because I don't follow, all i see is a cleric with a bloody pike slaughtering knights and such, then the next you know is a scout taking a wiz.

sina j · 03-25-2007, 04:17 AM

It's called a war. When you are at war, you don't kill someone then wait for the enemy to make a move before you attack again. You are mistaking this with TAO

It's supposed to be.... ok I don't even know what it's supposed to be, just read the story and the pictures go along with it. The scenes are numbered.

Ladrikz · 03-25-2007, 05:14 AM

D.O.F.L : Dies on floor laughing.

Legendary Drow · 03-26-2007, 06:02 PM

I like the story, very interesting. The drawings are umm.....bloody.

argetlam · 03-28-2007, 04:36 AM

HAHAHAHAHHA HAHAHAA wat artwrks OMG that was legend!!! xD nice sotry but that artwrks are tooo pwn!!!

03-25-2007, 03:55 AM	#1 (permalink)
sina j Official LF Nub Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,605	Pt 1: The Enchanted Weapon Part 1: The Enchanted Weapon Prologue: The Enchanted Weapon was first made by a member of the Mutant Rider tribe. Most of their population was killed by a devastating plague. Most races thought that the Mutant Rider tribe became instinct. Little did they know that 3 of the most elite leaders were out of their fort when this outbreak occurred. They were standing guard of the enchanted weapon. It's creator died 87 years ago, the enchanted weapon was created 100 years ago. Every 100 years, the enchanted weapon gains great power until the end of the year. Anyone that can take hold of this weapon during the year of the new century of it's creation, will obtain power like no other. They will be able to rule the world and have all worship them. You may wonder why won't one of the Mutant Rider tribe members use it. This is because the creator was smart and to prevent backstabbing in their tribe, he made it so that no Mutant Rider tribe member can lay hands on it. If they did, they would instantly die. So every 100 years, the 3 most powerful members of the tribe set off to it's location and protect if from being stolen and used. Only a few different individuals outside the Mutant Rider tribe know of it's location. One group includes the king and his loyal knights, one group includes the archers of Babylonia, and a group of amazon women. 1. The king and his 3 loyal knights were set off to find the enchanted weapon. 1 had a blue helmet, 1 had a red helmet, and 1 had a yellow helmet. They were all equal in power and were led by the king. 2. Little did they know that the spear was heavily guarded with the last 3 survivors of the Mutant Rider tribe. They had thought that their entire population was slaughtered, but they were obviously wrong, as the 3 most elite Mutant Rider leaders survived. 1 with yellow eyes, 1 with green eyes, and 1 with blue eyes. 3. Another group was also off to find the enchanted weapon. They were the 6 most elite archers from Babylonia. Their leader wore a traditional blue and red leather clothing. 4. A group of amazon women were also on their way to the enchanted weapon. A fierce assassin led them to several victories, now hoping to obtain there 4th victory. A flashback, of their last victory. 5. The knights beat the golem brothers in a war that occurred 7 months ago. It was their bloodiest battle. 6. The archers from Babylonia took out an "undefeatable" dragon within 1 minute around 2 months ago. Their leader shot 1 arrow which pierced it's chest and instantly killed it. Every Babylonian will remember the day the dragon that terrorized them all fell through the sky and hit the ground as it lay motionless. Unfortunately, no images remain in the minds of the group of the amazon women, as they set their mind straight on their objective, not on their victories. 7. All 4 groups were shocked as they came face to face. The Babylonian archers, the king and the knights, and the amazon women all had 1 intension. To obtain the enchanted weapon. Without any gestures or negotiations, they all immediately attacked. 8. Everybody knew that none of the groups will hold back, as the knight with the blue helmet was immediately shot and killed by an arrow from the leader of the Babylonian archers. The king froze in terror. The yellow-eyed Mutant Rider tribe member took out the knight with the yellow helmet. The amazon witch burned the knight with the red helmet. The green-eyed Mutant Rider tribe member killed the amazon spell caster before she could focus her paralysis spell. The Babylonian archers just slaughtered the blue-eyed Mutant Rider. While the archers were distracted by the battle, the amazon assassin snuck in from behind and killed 3 Babylonian archers. Luckily for them, one of them was peeing and saw the assassin, so he shot her while peeing. 9. The yellow-eyed Mutant Rider then stabbed the king. He was then shot by an arrow. The Babylonian archer leader then shot the amazon witch right in her head. The green-eyed Mutant Rider was shot down by 2 arrows. This day has been the greatest battle which will be passed down from generation to generation. It is the era of the Babylonians. They will now stand proudly above everyone else. The king and his loyal knights, the amazons, and the Mutant Riders have all been slaughtered, leaving the Babylonian archers. With great victory comes great sacrifice, as 3 Babylonian archers were killed. 10. The leader of the Babylonian archers was just 1 grasp away from becoming the most powerful man with the highest status on the entire planet. As soon as he was about to touch it, his body fell to the ground, as did the Babylonian archer standing across him. I knew greed and betrayal would come because of this enchanted weapon.... Wait! Why are his eyes glowing green? Why was his urine green!? That's not a Babylonian!! Who or what can he be! To be continued... __________________ Silly nub, Trix are for noobs! <-- Paint will dominate one day! Last edited by sina j; 04-07-2007 at 09:31 PM.

03-25-2007, 03:58 AM	#2 (permalink)
Killerdude500 Right Hand of the Emperor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Shiro Matsu Posts: 5,226	Nice drawings giggle __________________

03-25-2007, 04:12 AM	#5 (permalink)
DIGID Tim Duncan for 3! Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 3,577	Nice story. laughs Well-written and illustrated. Good job. __________________

03-25-2007, 04:13 AM	#6 (permalink)
The Judgeman Wandering Wolf Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: This Place Inside My Mind... Posts: 283	Lol, wth?!? Is it suppose to be a comic strip? Because I don't follow, all i see is a cleric with a bloody pike slaughtering knights and such, then the next you know is a scout taking a wiz. __________________ **"With My Sword And My Head Held High, Wolf Till I Die" RawR! Siggage: andobo\| rag)SZ(*\| Lobos*

03-25-2007, 04:17 AM	#7 (permalink)
sina j Official LF Nub Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,605	It's called a war. When you are at war, you don't kill someone then wait for the enemy to make a move before you attack again. You are mistaking this with TAO It's supposed to be.... ok I don't even know what it's supposed to be, just read the story and the pictures go along with it. The scenes are numbered. __________________ Silly nub, Trix are for noobs! <-- Paint will dominate one day!

03-25-2007, 05:14 AM	#8 (permalink)
Ladrikz Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: 8th Floor. Posts: 3,691	D.O.F.L : Dies on floor laughing. __________________

03-26-2007, 06:02 PM	#9 (permalink)
Legendary Drow Never Forgotten Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Dark Abyss Posts: 19,163	I like the story, very interesting. The drawings are umm.....bloody. __________________ Biggest Spammer/Rep Whore 2007 Go into battle with one goal....DESTROY EVERYTHING!

03-28-2007, 04:36 AM	#10 (permalink)
argetlam King of the Bold Golds Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: In True Blue's Room Posts: 2,438	HAHAHAHAHHA HAHAHAA wat artwrks OMG that was legend!!! xD nice sotry but that artwrks are tooo pwn!!! __________________ My dog, Ralph, was eaten by a Jowisu Please dont let this happen to YOUR dog. To support me, and my dog, please call 6554-983956-3958 and donate to the Jowisu ate my dog' Association Thank you.

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